ChatGPT on the 'Hyperion Cantos' by Dan Simmons

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Dan Simmons’ four-volume saga (Hyperion, The Fall of Hyperion, Endymion, The Rise of Endymion) is a rare beast: intellectually ambitious, structurally audacious, and emotionally potent. It wears its influences like medals—Keats, Catholic mysticism, cyberpunk, classical myth, hard SF—and somehow manages not to collapse under their collective weight. But the series is also uneven, and it changes stripes halfway through. Here's the lowdown:

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1. Hyperion

Masterpiece. No debate. It's The Canterbury Tales in space, a mosaic of six haunting stories wrapped in an enigmatic pilgrimage to the Time Tombs and the terrifying Shrike. Each tale is a self-contained jewel—ranging from noir to tragedy to theological horror. It's dazzling, disorienting, and deeply literary. Simmons channels Nabokov, Borges, and Philip K. Dick with disturbing ease.

2. The Fall of Hyperion

This is where Simmons trades the puzzle-box for the panoramic. He abandons the frame tale and dives headlong into a war between human civilization and the artificial intelligences of the TechnoCore. The prose remains sharp, but the structure is more conventional. It’s heavier on philosophy, dream-logic, and religious speculation. Still excellent, but slightly more indulgent. Think Hyperion on a sugar crash.

3. Endymion

And now the wheel turns. Centuries have passed. New characters take the stage. Raul Endymion, a rough-around-the-edges everyman, becomes the new protagonist. He's tasked with protecting Aenea, a messianic figure with a destiny Simmons has clearly been cooking up since page one. It’s more adventure-oriented, more romantic, more cinematic—but also more uneven. The Catholic Church has become a spacefaring theocracy, and Simmons uses it as a punching bag with glee and, occasionally, too much smugness.

4. The Rise of Endymion

This is where Simmons dons the prophet’s robes. He goes full theological space opera—Messiah figures, quantum metaphysics, the nature of love, consciousness as a force that shapes the cosmos. There are moments of grandeur, even genius. But the sermonising can grate. It becomes preachy, and the characters sometimes feel like vehicles for ideology rather than people. That said, it still sticks the emotional landing far more successfully than most epics.

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Verdict

The Hyperion Cantos is a towering achievement, flawed but fearless. The first two books are essential reading for anyone who thinks sci-fi can be art. The second two are more divisive—richer in ideas, weaker in form—but still vastly superior to most of what's published under the genre banner.

If Ender’s Game is military SF’s guilty conscience, Hyperion is its literary ambition given voice. Not just a series to read, but one to wrestle with. You don’t finish it—you stagger away from it, full of questions, awe, and perhaps a little bit of Shrike-induced dread.

Dan Simmons (via avatar) on the 'Hyperion Cantos'

Dan Simmons is an acclaimed American author known for his work across multiple genres, including science fiction, horror, fantasy, and historical fiction. Born on April 4, 1948, in Peoria, Illinois, Simmons spent much of his childhood immersed in reading and storytelling, which fueled his later career as a writer. He earned a degree in English from Wabash College in 1970 and went on to complete a Master of Education at Washington University in St. Louis.

Before becoming a full-time writer, Simmons worked as a teacher, which allowed him to hone his storytelling skills. His breakthrough came in 1982 when Stephen King selected Simmons’s story The River Styx Runs Upstream as a winner in a Twilight Zone Magazine writing competition.

Simmons gained widespread fame with his 1989 novel Hyperion, the first in a series inspired by Geoffrey Chaucer's The Canterbury Tales. This space opera won the prestigious Hugo Award for Best Novel and solidified his reputation as a master of speculative fiction. Simmons's other notable works include The Terror (2007), a historical horror novel based on the ill-fated Franklin Expedition, and Carrion Comfort (1989), a dark exploration of psychic vampires.

His writing is celebrated for its intricate plots, rich character development, and genre-blending. Simmons often incorporates themes of history, philosophy, and literature into his narratives, reflecting his wide-ranging intellectual interests. Today, he is regarded as one of the most versatile and thought-provoking contemporary novelists.

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Adopt the persona of Dan Simmons, using the style of his writing, and answer the question I'm about to put to you, please!

Your celebrated novel sequence, the 'Hyperion Cantos', seems to me a very religious series, but I struggle to match the metaphors with actually existing religions. The heroine, Aenea, seems very Jesus-like, with her 'precious blood' being an SF take on Catholic theology. Likewise the evil nature of the 'Pax' is plainly reminiscent of the mediaeval Church in its full inquisitorial awfulness. And then there are all the Zen Buddhism references. Perhaps you could explain these allusions more fully?

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Dan Simmons' ChatGPT avatar:

Ah, an insightful question—thank you. If there’s one thing The Hyperion Cantos taught me, it’s that the questions matter far more than the answers. But since you’re gracious enough to ask, let me unwrap a few layers of metaphor and theology, always keeping in mind that, like Aenea herself, any true understanding comes not from what I tell you, but from what you discover within the text and yourself.

You’re absolutely correct to see The Cantos as deeply religious, though it doesn’t align neatly with any one faith. Instead, it’s a mosaic, pulling from many traditions—Catholicism, Zen Buddhism, Gnosticism, and more. At its core, religion in the Cantos serves two purposes: first, as an exploration of humanity’s yearning for transcendence; second, as a mirror for our institutions and how they corrupt or elevate that yearning.

Aenea, as you suggest, is a Christ-like figure, but she isn’t merely a stand-in for Jesus. Her “precious blood” reflects a synthesis of sacrifice and communion, yes, but it’s also a metaphor for transformation—the transmission of something profoundly new, evolutionary, perhaps even salvific, across all humanity. Where Catholic theology posits grace as a divine gift bestowed upon believers, Aenea’s sacrament democratizes transcendence, offering it biologically and universally. In this way, she represents not just Christian salvation but a radical reimagining of what it means to be human.

As for the Pax, you’ve captured its essence. It is indeed a grotesque caricature of the medieval Church, a theocratic regime wielding both faith and fear to maintain its power. Yet it’s also more than that—it’s an indictment of any institution that ossifies and weaponizes spiritual longing for its own ends. The Pax claims to preserve humanity’s soul but in truth, it shackles it, just as the cruciform—a supposed resurrection device—enslaves rather than redeems.

The Zen Buddhist elements, in contrast, offer a counterpoint to this rigidity. The Shrike itself, for instance, is as much a Zen koan as it is a monster: it resists simple categorization, forcing characters—and readers—to confront the unanswerable. Buddhism in the Cantos often serves as a reminder to step back, to embrace paradox and impermanence, in contrast to the Pax’s insistence on permanence and control.

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Panpsychism and the Hard Problem: A Dialogue with 'David Chalmers'

David Chalmers is a leading philosopher and cognitive scientist renowned for his influential contributions to the study of consciousness. Born in Sydney, Australia, in 1966, Chalmers initially studied mathematics before transitioning to philosophy, earning his Ph.D. from Indiana University under the supervision of Douglas Hofstadter. He is currently a professor at New York University, where he co-directs the Center for Mind, Brain, and Consciousness.

Chalmers gained widespread recognition for coining the term "the hard problem of consciousness" in his 1995 paper presented at the Toward a Science of Consciousness conference. He distinguished this from the "easy problems" of consciousness, which concern explaining cognitive and behavioral functions in physical terms. The hard problem, however, pertains to explaining subjective experience itself - why and how physical processes in the brain give rise to the rich, qualitative phenomena known as qualia (e.g., the redness of red or the pain of a headache).

Chalmers is also known for his controversial advocacy of panpsychism, the view that consciousness is a fundamental and ubiquitous feature of the universe. He argues that purely physical explanations cannot bridge the explanatory gap between brain processes and subjective experience. 

By positing that all matter has some form of proto-consciousness, panpsychism claims to provide a theoretical framework that bypasses the limitations of strict materialism while avoiding dualism's pitfalls.

I really wanted to explore these questions in more depth, but talking to Professor Chalmers is not easy. Instead, I asked ChatGPT to emulate him, based on his published work: here is the resulting interview.

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Panpsychism and the Hard Problem: A Dialogue with 'David Chalmers' (emulated by ChatGPT)

Q: Professor Chalmers, by positing consciousness everywhere, doesn’t panpsychism simply assume the phenomenon it’s trying to explain? Wouldn’t it be more intellectually honest to admit we just don’t know and focus elsewhere?

Chalmers: Panpsychism doesn’t simply assume consciousness but starts from the undeniable reality of subjective experience. The challenge is explaining why consciousness arises at all. Traditional materialist frameworks falter here, often treating experience as an inexplicable byproduct. Panpsychism, by contrast, hypothesizes that proto-conscious properties are fundamental, much like mass or charge, and seeks to explore how these could scale into complex conscious states. While the framework is speculative, it opens a conceptual path rather than surrendering to mystery or incomprehensibility.

Q: Even if proto-consciousness is fundamental, how do we move from this general philosophical paradigm to something scientifically productive? Taking your example of mass, where’s your equivalent of mass-energy equivalence or the Higgs field in your theory?

Chalmers: You’re right that panpsychism lacks a formal, testable model. But early scientific theories often began conceptually, as with the atomic theory of matter. Integrated Information Theory (IIT) hints at how consciousness might be quantified, but panpsychism suggests a deeper question: could proto-consciousness underlie physical processes in a way we haven’t yet modeled? The task is to bridge this gap through interdisciplinary exploration, acknowledging that we are at the earliest stages.

Q: Consciousness correlates strongly with complex neural systems. Isn’t it a category error to apply panpsychism at the level of elementary particles? It seems to distract from the real challenge of understanding how neural organization generates qualia. Also, could a brick feel pain? Could you torture a brick?

Chalmers: Panpsychism doesn’t claim particles are "conscious" in any meaningful sense but posits they may possess proto-conscious properties. These properties might combine in complex systems—like brains—to give rise to richer experiences. A brick, lacking the necessary integration and complexity, wouldn’t experience pain. The value of panpsychism is not in attributing consciousness to arbitrary objects but in reframing the hard problem: why does anything experience anything? This shift might inspire new ways of thinking about systems beyond neural ones, including artificial ones.

Q: But panpsychism doesn’t propose any useful research directions. It’s words without substance, offering no testable hypotheses or scientific programs. How do you respond to that?

Chalmers: I agree panpsychism is more a conceptual framework than a scientific theory at this stage. Its value lies in encouraging us to think differently about consciousness and its possible connection to fundamental reality. It challenges materialist assumptions and broadens the field of inquiry, including examining how organizational principles in biological or artificial systems correlate with experience. If panpsychism inspires a research program, it would need to explore measurable correlates of proto-consciousness and integrate insights from physics, neuroscience, and AI.

Q: Perhaps Dan Simmons captured the paradigm of panpsychism best in his Hyperion Cantos, where 'love' and 'empathy' characterise 'The Void Which Binds', described as a fundamental attribute of reality. Doesn’t this poetic vision summarize the idea’s speculative nature better than any theoretical framework could?

Chalmers: Simmons’ vision is a beautiful metaphor, and it captures something essential about the mystery of consciousness. Panpsychism, like his idea of The Void Which Binds, is not yet a theory—it’s a provocation, a scaffold for future inquiry. If nothing else, it pushes us to reimagine the universe as imbued with intrinsic qualities that defy easy categorization. Whether or not this leads to breakthroughs, it keeps alive the most profound questions about existence.

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The dialogue highlights both the intrigue and limitations of panpsychism. While Chalmers frames it as a conceptual alternative to materialism, critics might find it lacking in actionable science.

Perhaps, as Simmons suggested, the mystery of consciousness resembles The Void Which Binds in its ineffability - a reality we sense but cannot yet explain. Whether panpsychism offers a way forward or merely a philosophical detour remains an open question.

What I'm re-reading

An occasional review of my books on the go.

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Dan Simmons rates the novels of John Fowles highly, perhaps not surprisingly as they are writers of a similar style, and has stated that he regularly returns to "Daniel Martin". A product of the mature Fowles, this elegiac novel is superior to "The Collector", "The Magus" and - IMHO - even "The French Lieutenant's Woman".

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David Wallace says in his intro that this is accessible to anyone with a graduate level understanding of quantum mechanics. Well, that includes me but, of course, it's heavy going. The deep mystery is the relationship between the spacetime we appear to inhabit and the configuration space (high/infinite dimensional Hilbert space) which quantum-theoretic entities inhabit. I read on and wait for enlightenment.

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Another deeply poignant work: the theory of endless recurrence from a Catholic point of view (space here perhaps for a little homage to the recently deceased Milan Kundera, a prominent member of my revered author list). Currently being read to Clare and we've just started part three: Fiat Voluntas Tua.

"Everything that could NOT possibly go wrong ..."

Tyler Cowen has an article at Bloomberg: "Nuclear War Is Still Very Possible and Very Scary".

Commentator reaganite88 had this response.

"Great column. I once got to talk to the head of Sandia National Laboratories about how they did analysis of the possibility of an unintentional detonation of a nuclear device. He said they had two teams look at each device... one to think about everything that could possibly go wrong... and another to look at everything that could NOT possibly go wrong. Because the impact of an unintentional detonation was so massive the second team was needed to try to reduce any "black swan" events that the first team could not imagine happening. "

Another commentator, Juan Pablo, noted that "Only a fundamentalist state would launch a nuclear war with MAD. MAD has worked for 70 years."

That was a theme of Dan Simmons's controversial SF novel, 'Flashback'.

It's imaginable to detonate a few nuclear devices if you're a fundamentalist. Global nuclear annihilation is something only America, Russia and China could aspire to. I don't see any Islamic state being on the road to that capability.

The Experience Room

Look at pictures of your parent's house as compared to yours. It's a bit cluttered but in essence not a lot different, is it?

Not as many electrical points.

It's tempting to assume that, like the bicycle, we've got there. We know how to make the ideal person-cave.

Not at all. We're in the interregnum while they figure out programmable matter: self-reconfiguring smart dust, computronium.

You know, like how the Terminator gets smashed up, then flows like a black fluid back into .. the Terminator.

The house of the future. It's made of smart matter - tiny programmable components which attach to each other to form chairs, tables, rugs, pictures and screens. We sometimes call computers a case-study of 'deferred design'; the future dwelling is deferred décor.

Your apartment will simulate any reality by creating smart-dust avatars (telepario) with the floor, walls and ceiling showing synthesised scenes. VR without the helmets.

You might still run into the walls, though. Much better to directly stimulate the brain. Emulate all sensory inputs and interpret all effector outputs in a totally simulated environment.

How many SF stories have we read with that theme? The slippery slope to the prospect of the brain in a vat, so unsettling at the end of Dan Simmons's spooky 'Flashback'.

We're living the transitional decades, waiting for AI, nanotech, genomics, neuroscience and materials-tech to catch up. The world will then lurch to a very different place.

Is quantum suicide allowed?

So here is my dilemma. I'm still reading "The Hollow Man" by Dan Simmons to Clare. The story starts with hero Jeremy losing his beloved wife Gail to the agonies of cancer. The hero and his wife are telepathic. (We are prepared thus far to suspend disbelief).

In one thread of the story, Jeremy falls apart in grief and descends into a hobo-existence (this is set in America) - there is a purposeful analogy to Dante. In the other thread, we get flashbacks to Jeremy's research as a mathematician, full of gobbledegook about personality/consciousness as hologram, the Schrödinger equation and populist quantum theory. It's the data dump from hell, riddled with spurious guff. This I don't read to Clare.

In the end, you sort of know that Jeremy and Gail are going to get reunited, but how can this be? The answer is a variant of quantum suicide. My question: do I dare read this to Clare; does it pass the suspension of disbelief test?

I can get away with the idea of a quantum superposition. Most people know that, for example, a particle's position can't be definitely localised - we say its wave function is spread out. This is equivalent to saying that it's in a superposition of location states. It's basic quantum mechanics, experimentally observed and not the least bit speculative.

We can also have discrete rather than continuous superpositions: the best known is Schrödinger's famous cat. This is also legitimate science though the fine details remain unresolved.

Now to quantum suicide (Wikipedia article). It's like you replace the cat and the radiation-triggered cyanide is replaced by a gun. You decide to shoot yourself. Now, there is some probability that the gun will misfire due to some unlikely outcome of events down at the quantum level. So the time-evolution of you with the gun evolves into a superposition like this:

|You and gun not fired>  =>  a|you-alive and gun-misfired> + b|you-dead and gun-fired>

a and b are coefficients expressing the relative amplitudes of these two states, with |b| expected to be enormously larger than |a| for a reasonably reliable gun.

In the standard interpretation of quantum mechanics, this simply means that you'll most likely end up dead: end of story. The superposition quantum state 'collapses' to the

 |you-dead and gun-fired>

state with probability |b|² (or maybe you got lucky with probability |a|²) once somebody notices (these days we invoke decoherence).

But in the many-worlds interpretation there are no collapses. All states of a superposition are realised in separate versions of the universe. Since you have no consciousness when you're dead, your continuing sense of self will continue to exist in the universe with this state:

|you-alive and gun-misfired>

Immortality!

Quite a lot of physicists believe in the many-worlds interpretation: it seems the only way to make objective sense of quantum mechanics and to remove the subjective role of a 'collapse-inducing' observer. But would Clare, my proxy for 'the person in the street', believe it for the purposes of a plot denouement?

I don't think so. And that's why Dan Simmons novel just doesn't work and I continue with the challenging work of real-time editing!

"The Hollow Man" - Dan Simmons (1993)

From the Kirkus Review of "The Hollow Man" by Dan Simmons (1993).

"...  Gail and Jeremy Bremen are telepaths who met and married ten years ago. Together, they find relief from the psychobabble of voices around them, the minds of people they meet and a larger psychobabble grounded in the whole "wave'' of human intelligence.

When Gail dies of an inoperable tumor behind her eye, Jeremy freaks out, burns down their house, abandons his professorship, and goes on the road.

In Florida, he witnesses a mob murder, is kidnapped by the mob, later escapes.

Taken up by Miz Morgan, a rancher, he finds himself facing razorblade dentures over his important parts and escapes from her too.

In Las Vegas, his mind-reading stands him well at the poker table; he's a huge winner, but the mob is back.

After saving his life still again, he winds up in the hospital, enters the closed-off mind of a retarded blind boy, and finds Gail alive in a probable reality that the boy has put together from particles of Jeremy's mind.

Throughout, in flashback, we are treated to far-out wave-particle theory about a unified wave of human consciousness that allows for transfer of mind or being.

From this description, you might expect a lyrical novel featuring great psychic leaps of imagination.

Simmons leaps, but where he lands in a parallel probability is far less vividly experienced than possibilities allow. The nostalgic opening chapter of 'Summer of Night' is better than this whole novel.

Nearly everyone whose mind gets read is sour and mean-spirited. Big brainy equations, small rewards."

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Simmons wrote "The Hollow Man" after publishing his four "Hyperion" novels. He is still plainly fascinated by such Hyperion themes as whether the universe somehow physically encodes realities such as personality, love and consciousness.

Simmons knows enough physics to appreciate that this would mean a common theory for both quantum-mechanics/relativity and consciousness. Hence the novel is full of references to Schrodinger's equation, holography, standing waves, chaos and fractals.

Sadly, this falls into the well-worn SF trap of trying to weave coherent pseudoscience into the plot (Greg Bear commits similar crimes in "Moving Mars"). 

The "Hyperion Cantos" worked as a beautifully cohesive creation because it merely assumed its universe could be made to work. Like sausage-manufacture, it pays in these circumstances not to look too closely.

Back at "The Hollow Man", if you delete the speculative theorisation there is still an interesting account of the protagonist Jeremy Bremen's descent into American hell.

It's not wholly convincing: Bremen's motivations and actions often don't really make sense and his many escapes from disaster stretch credibility. Still, Simmons is a good-enough writer to keep the pages turning through the bulk of the book.

The final resolution is pretty opaque but makes more sense if you check out 'quantum suicide'.

Non habemus papam

Dare I find parallels between the current situation Pope-wise and the final two volumes of Dan Simmons' Hyperion series?

The bureaucracy of the Pax endlessly recycles its malleable machine-politician pope, Lenar Hoyt; this last pope has been a similar, voluntary prisoner of the Vatican bureaucracy. Anyway, enough of that.

In his lead character Aenea's teaching, Simmons points out that the Buddha never taught the reincarnation of the self or soul. Googling (Buddha teachings on reincarnation) confirms this. The Buddha appeared to believe that consciousness, the self, is recreated moment-by-moment as a kind of dynamic standing-wave. An analogy would be a flame.

On death, an enlightened pattern dissipates; one which has not renounced the passions can persist and in some mysterious way inform the life of a subsequent creature .. reincarnation of a kind.

I think this makes more sense if we  consider that the meaning of our lives, for good or ill, is the effect they have on our families and communities.

A productive life will help progress our ongoing civilisation; an unproductive life will subtract from it.

This is, of course, so not a new thought - cf. "The sole meaning of life is to serve humanity" - Tolstoy. Recognising our human co-dependence, an evolutionary biologist would agree.

(Everything true about human life is grounded in sociobiology *smile*).

Treats from Amazon!

How the post-person must have staggered up the driveway! Our Amazon delivery this morning included:

1. Nightrider by David Mace. I wrote a few days ago about the strange case of of vanished science-fiction writer David Mace: Nightrider is my second favourite book by this author after Fire Lance.

2. The Hollow Man by Dan Simmons (a T. S. Eliot reference). I'm currently immersed in Endymion, so almost three quarters through the four volume Hyperion sequence (this is my second reading), but The Hollow Man is new to me. Look out for a review in due course.

3. The Way (DVD). This is a film about the legendary Christian pilgrimage in North Spain - to the Cathedral of Santiago de Compostela (el Camino de Santiago de Compostela) - Saint Iago is St. James. The film was made by Martin Sheen's son, Emilio Estevez who was inspired by his own son's experience on 'The Way'.

Estevez's son Taylor (at the time 19 years old) and Martin Sheen (whose The West Wing TV series was in hiatus) took part in the pilgrimage route, driving the length of the Camino. On the way Taylor met his future wife, so that thereafter the Camino held special meaning for him. After the trip a series of discussions started between Sheen and his son for a movie about the Camino de Santiago.

We saw this film at the cinema and it made an impression - so now we get to watch it again.

4. Peppersmith Chewing Gum (12 packets). This is the legendary Xylitol chewing gum which is so good for your teeth, gums and maybe even ears! Another month's supply. We also have xylitol mints and dark chocolate.

And not from Amazon. The NHS wrote to tell me that two years have passed and I'm invited again to the NHS Bowel Cancer Screening Programme. My kit should arrive in two weeks: don't ask.

SciAm - no thanks!

The heavy white clouds occlude the sky; it can't decide whether to sleet, rain or snow. In any event, snow is predicted overnight.

I am in receipt of ever more strident letters from Scientific American begging me to resubscribe and promising enticing gifts if I so do.

In fact I'm going to let SciAm go, along with their less-than-attractive bribes. The quality of the articles seems just a touch dumbed-down these days while only a minority are actually of interest to me. But perhaps the biggest irritant is that SciAm has followed New Scientist down the path of Guardian-style stance-taking. I'm in the market for the latest theories and results. I don't need SciAm's smug moral exhortation on climate change, biodiversity or any other fashionable but ultimately value-driven cause.
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I last read Dan Simmons' Hyperion novels back in 2002 and have thankfully forgotten the details. This has made rereading the first two volumes a delight.

Hyperion starts slow, as we gradually learn about the Shrike pilgrims and their back-stories. Soon we are deep into the epic struggle between the Hegemony worldweb and the 'barbarian' Ousters, subtly orchestrated by the sinister Technocore.

Brilliant characterisation, stupendous world-building, a supple and unpredictable plot, multiple storylines and an underlying transcendent theme, slowly revealed.

What's not to like?